I was nominated for this super fun activity by EddieSims, author of the awesome Sloane Legacy. I LOVE looking back on my stories and seeing how things progressed and even seeing how my writing has progressed. One of the most rewarding things I’ve done was to go back and read my stories once they are completed. I haven’t been able to do that with Discovering Juliana yet although I need to reread chapters for reference, so this challenge will have to do. 🙂
The Rules:
- Thank the person who nominated you.
- Share FIVE of your favorite moments from your legacy/story/challenge so far.
- Nominate up to 5 blogs to do the same.
The Memories:
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Juliana learning to read.
This was one of the first ideas I had for this story when I began to gather ideas for it. Actually, for a long time it was the only idea! I loved being able to show not only how hard Juliana would have to work, but also Harriett. Her investment into this poor stranger setup the entire story. -
Harold & the Piano
Pretty much any moment with Harold is going to be at the top of my list! I love this guy, and he melts my heart in ways no other character does. I knew many things about Harold and always jumped at the chance to give you a deeper look into his life, and I believe this was the first time. I loved showing you that he wasn’t simply a crabby old man but a man in pain. But, also that he had beautiful parts to him too. -
Hillary & Jase’s Night Together
I originally wrote out their entire night and the next morning! I’m sure you all would have loved to witness how much fun they had, but in the end, I didn’t think it was necessary and put the highlights in Jase’s flashback when they had their fight. Anyway, I loved this because I think it perfectly showed how much Hillary had been kidding herself. She tried to make it seem like she was just going for the ride, but she was being her true self. She loved Jase, and being with him meant everything to her. It was everything she ever wanted, and I loved giving her that opportunity…and a cute little present to remember it by, he he he. -
Juliana Telling Her Story for the First Time (in public)
I always wanted to “hear” Juliana recant chapter 7 in her own words. Ideally, I wanted her to tell Harriett the story first, but I could never orchestrate the right moment. And then, Hillary kept stealing the spotlight, and next thing I knew Juliana had been in Willow Creek for 10 months! Knowing the Humphries family are poor communicators, I suppose it’s not so far fetched to believe no one bothered to ask Juliana how she got there, but I just don’t buy it. Especially not with all the time she spent with Harriett day in and day out. So, my head canon is that she had previously told this story before on one of the days that weren’t recorded in this story or one of the days where Hillary was in the spotlight.
I loved this moment because it’s the first time we ever heard Juliana say more than a few words. Naturally, she talked a lot more in moments that I don’t show, like casual moments around the house and two hours in the car with Kevin; I mean, they didn’t become fast friends for no reason, right? But, anyway, I wanted us to experience the more chatty Juliana. It was kind of difficult to write. I’m a native English speaker, and most people I hang around are too. I had to think hard about what I was writing and make it sound un-American and like someone who is still learning English…I mean, Simlish 😛 -
KEVIANA!!!
And, because I’m divergent, I’ll give you all my other favorite moments in pictures at no extra charge!
Allllllll of the Harold scenes steal my heart (and usually my tears too)
All of those screenshots at the end really hit my heart at different times too.
So neat to hear your thoughts and sneak peaks into your head canon as well for how Juliana probably did relay her story especially to Harriet early on, good way to incorporate for the readers though to have her tell to Kevin.
Hillary and Jase. Omg omg omg one of the sweetest moments between two characters I’ve had the pleasure of reading!
I’m glad you enjoyed this! I love sharing all my secrets lol.
One of my favourite moments was when Kevin first noticed Juliana as a woman. I think they were all at a party at the Bluffs or something where Juliana dressed up and Kevin was like in awe of her. It was the first time he realised her beauty. Of course he was still hung up on his late wife and still thought of Juliana as a kid, but that moment to me was the start of their excruciatingly slow to mature romance.
I also liked the chapter where Hillary gave birth. That moment between her and Harold was so sweet. I miss Harriet a lot. Her wisdom and kindness maintained the balance in this crazy family but had she still been alive, this touching moment between Harold and his daughter would not have happened because as usual he would have let Harriet take care of “the dirty work”. I’m happy that their relationship is in a good place now and I hope it continues to improve.
Awww man! That was a great moment. I felt like Juliana kinda (unknowingly) bulldozed over him that night lol. She definitely started something that night. She should remember to thank Hillary for the makeover lol.
Love your thoughts on Harold. Couldn’t have said it better!
Loved these moments! Having played the piano myself since age 7, that Harold-at-the-piano moment was everything.
I would’ve really struggled to pick my top five moments in this story, but I think one of them would’ve been the picture at the top of this post, I think that’s when Kevin first took Juliana to see the gallery he’s having built for her. I love big shows of love, even if neither can call it what it is yet.
I love that picture! I was trying to pose them for the last pic in that chapter, but I picked the wrong pose and got that one! I had to keep it lol. It’s totally appropriate now! 😀
I totally is!
I loved all the moments you chose! And the extras, too! <3
Yay! Glad you enjoyed the brief walk down memory lane. ☺️
Ypuicked all,of my favorites too! Lovely!
Yay!