Time in Willow Creek: 2 weeks
Harold Humphries was a bit of a homebody and never cared to venture past work and home. His philosophy was nothing existed outside the house that could be more exciting than anything he could watch on television. Needless to say, he was a very lazy man. But, it was the first day of his retirement, and his wife, Harriett, was determined to show him a world beyond the TV. She took him to the park to enjoy the great outdoors…and maybe get some sun on his pasty skin. They shuffled along the far side of the park by the water in the blazing afternoon sun. The air was thick like a sweater, and the mosquitos flocked to him like ants on a discarded piece of candy.
“Ok…I had enough of this outside business. Time to go on home.”
Hariett huffed. “But, we’ve only been here for 10 minutes!”
“And it’s been 10 minutes too long!”
She shook her head and glared at him, but someone caught her attention. “Oh look, Harold! It’s Rebecca!”
She pointed to the middle-aged red-head sitting on the bench.
He slinked over to the woman. “Hey, pumpkin pie. How’s my favorite daughter?”
She was their oldest and worked in a big, fancy building and must have been on her lunch break; it was around midday.
She stood and greeted him with a hug.
“Harold! You can’t say that.”
“Hey daddy!”
“Well, it’s true, and everybody know it.” He turned his attention back to Rebecca. “How is my Sloane and the rest of your brood?”
Sloane was Rebecca’s oldest daughter and Harold’s favorite grandchild. Harriett took a seat next to the sleeping woman while her loved ones got caught up.
“The children are fine. That husband of mine is still quite a sick puppy.”
“He’s weak! Any man who pines after a woman like he does ain’t got no room to call himself a man. And you’re a fool for marrying him! You shoulda stuck with the first one. Now that was a real man.”
“Harold!”
“It’s ok, mama. Even us ‘tough as nails’ girls can be sentimental fools sometimes.”
Their squabble must have been too loud. The sleeping woman woke up and walked away. Harriett sat next to a young, dark-haired girl behind Rebecca.
“Come sit down, honey,” Harriett said to Rebecca.
The three of them sat on the empty bench.
“Are you being a good wife and taking care of Jack? You ‘tough as nails’ gals tend to forget about your wifely duties!”
Rebecca rolled her eyes. “Oh please, mama. Jack knew what I was when he married me. It’s his own fault for falling in love.”
“I declare! You modern women! Y’all don’t know a thing about being a wife and running a household! You just think about self. No wonder you’re on your fourth marriage!”
“How I conduct my marriages and my household is my business, mama. Maybe you should tend to your own marriage. Daddy has been unhappy for years. Maybe you’re not doing your job right.”
“Your daddy is a contemptible old fool! There’s no satisfying him.”
Harold grunted.
“Hmmm. That’s a matter of perspective. I’ve gotta get back to the office. See y’all.”
I like how we can tell that there’s huge emotions and personalities going on in this family even from the very first chapter!
Yay! I’m glad.
Really nice character piece. I like the twist at the end– maybe you should take better care of dad!
I hope to prove, or disprove, her point throughout the entire story. You can decide for yourself 🙂
I hope they add the “fish slap” ability for angler sims. Then River can leap out of his alternate reality and come give this family a nice round of applause.. hahaha
LOL
I love how Juliana was there the entire time, but not in the foreground!
Good eye 😉
Thanks 😀
‘Modern women’ hmmm! Some interesting generational differences between the parents and their kids!
Oh yes 🙂
<3 this!! You're such a great story teller. I'm already drawn in!
🙂
Squee!!!
That is a really strange conversation to me. It could be a cultural difference, but I am not at all accustomed to people talking like that. *blush*
Yeah lol. This family is inspired by the southern American accent. It’s a bit strange!
I love this couple! Of course, the story isn’t about them, but still, enjoyable. Did the couple just happen to be there when you were playing Juliana? Or was this somehow part of your plan? Either way, marvelous, dahling! 😉
Ha! Thank you.
Ok, here’s a behind the scenes look! I hope it doesn’t ruin it for any new readers lol. I don’t “play” this save. They exist for the sole purpose of me manipulating them to take pictures. So, autonomy is off like 95% of the time. Juliana has always lived with the Humphries–it was just easier to put her where I wanted to her that way.
Hey, I really like your stories! 🙂 Don’t ever quit.
Thanks for checking it out!
Welcome!
Harold is quite the grumpy-pants. And four marriages? Goodness, girl! But different strokes for different folks I guess.
Heh, grumpy pants indeed!
Oh goodness, I love your characters so much already! You’re setting up a really interesting “cast” with this chapter! FOURTH marriage though? DANG. 😛
Ha ha! Yes! Fourth marriage! Glad you like
Ha! Haven’t read this one yet. Onto it!
“Ok…I had enough of this outside business,” I know how you feel, Harold. 😀
HA! Yay! I’m glad you found this! Soon, I’ll be continuing this!! I am sooooooooo excited!
Starting over from the beginning on a great story is my favorite!! I forgot how ornery Harold was. I’m going to be patient and wait until you tell us to read the next chapter…
Yay! 😀 Yeah, Harold is a bit of a pain…but I love him.
Very cool start!!! I like the way you portray the characters and the differences in the generations already!
Harold apparently makes no bones about his favorites!!
Thanks! Yeah, Harold flat out does not care lol.
this was funny. i love harold. well for now. he reminds me of me. that might be bad lol but i can see the world on tv..
Friendsfan! What a pleasant surprise! 😀
lol.
i realized tonight i read your stories about once a month. i read a post in january and now its febuary.
HA! Whatever works I guess lol.
lol. my reading list is really long. so of course i’m ignoring it and writing instead.
I do the same thing lol
lol. we are so alike.
Hello! I’m a ~little~ bit late to the bandwagon, but I’m reading it now! The characters are already so interesting!
Heeeey! Welcome to the party! Latecomers get the fabulous gift if reading through all my nasty cliffhangers LOL. Glad you’re enjoying it so far.
It feels like it was not too long ago I bookmarked this page to begin reading after asking you for some recommendations on where to start, and it has already been two months *facepalm* Where does the time go? I’m assuming you’re probably finished with the story by now since you mentioned you were nearly done with it last time I commented here, which is good news for me as I may have an uninterrupted binge. 🙂 I did warn you about my sporadic notifications, right? I almost thought I had stumbled onto the wrong story until I saw Julianna sitting on the bench there. Interesting to not have the story begin from her p.o.v. – which I’m assuming will eventually be the case given the title of the story and all. Seeing the way Harold greeted Rebecca, I didn’t expect the family conversation to turn like that at the end there, haha. Excited to see where this goes!
Ha ha! Hey there! The last chapter will be out on Sunday!!! Happy bingeing!
Yay, here I am! Ready to read, fashionably late 😉 I’m really excited to see where this is all going! Like Amy before me, I almost feared I’d gone to the wrong story until I noticed Juliana in the background, lol 😀
New phone who dis? 😛 I kid, I kid. Hello, Louise! And, welcome! Fashionably late is where it’s at. You guys get to skip all my nasty cliffhangers LOL.
Great storytelling!